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Monday, August 29, 2011

Never Add Someone You Don't Know On Facebook

      There once was a girl name Maria, but there is a girl name Emily that don't like Maria because Maria is dating Emily's ex boyfriend, that Emily still likes.Emily can't seem to thinnk of a plan to get rid of Maria. So she tells her mother. Then they thought of a perfect plan to get rid of Maria now. A couple of days later they made a fake facebook of a guy that they were for sure that Maria would like him and break up with her boyfriend and go out with the fake guy. Maria was on facebook and she noticed that she had a friend request from a guy she didn't know. Emilly was sure to make ther guy to have everything that Maria liked about guys. So Emily told Maria's boyfriend that Maria was cheating on him because she is talking to the fake guy on facebook. Maria's boyfriend broke up with her, so a couple of days later, Maria has been talking to the guy and telling him everything  about her. Then the guy just suddenly said, I thhink it's better if you died!!! Maria sream and cried for a long time. In the morning her mom noticed that she didn't go to school. She went in her room and she had hanged herself.    

This story was inspired by some videos that we watched in school, you can go to Netsmartz.org to watch the videos.

5 comments:

  1. Your story is very touching! Something you might wanna consider is your spelling and other than that is was very good.

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  2. the story was great but that was a little dark

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  3. Your story was very interesting I like how you added details to it but, make sure you proof read your story either way it was good.

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  4. That is a good story it is a little dark but that does happen to people,and check your spelling before you post

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  5. What would you do if you knew Maria but Emily was your best friend... Would get mad at Emily for doing something Stupid like that???

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