Hi, My name is Deena and I am a college student. I just read this post of yours and I am very impressed. You seem like a very good writer of poetry. You were very discriptive and that will draw in your readers. I felt like I was in the snow, when I was reading your post. It is very realistic and it tugs at the hearts of your readers! Great job!
wow that is emotional Yengshi this is Wesley and your story is awesome like when you said that "there was death all over", that is really emotional.